Improv-ing -- week 3

Going Down.

We talked about Quisiera Declarar this week in class. I noticed that it's thirteen senentence poem broken up into lines that take up three pages of the book. On the other hand, Going Down in made up of eleven lines and takes up a little more than half the page. The poem is a little more choppy. I noticed that the senetences towards the beginning of the chapter are a lot shorter (especially the first three lines). As the poem moves down the page the sentences get longer, but they're still broken up with commas.